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Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T23:17:53Z

lol-- nope

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T20:50:11Z

YAY for Abigail not being just another damsel in distress !!!!

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T20:25:05Z

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T20:23:07Z

Glad she took out two of the scumbags! I wonder who she's truly looking for.

CD

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T14:32:38Z

Thanks Eric! I was going for that ... I'm glad it worked!

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T14:31:50Z

Thank you!!

I wrote this as a class exercise, which was to start with a far narrative distance and come in close, but never reveal the main character's thought patterns. So -- I started with a main character that was timid, but she transformed into a bit of a vigilante by the time I was done with it.

I'm working on more ideas for her.

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T14:28:31Z

Thank you! I wanted to bring it just to the point of real discomfort, and then change the position of power.

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T14:27:34Z

Thank you! I'm debating whether or not I expand her character a bit.

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-14T14:26:31Z

In this case, I'll take that as a good thing

Comment on Out of the Dark

2010-02-13T18:46:48Z

Seems like she had a score to settle! Very intense. I love this phrase "the firery blast ruptured the air inside the warehouse" Very powerful.