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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 23:17:53 GMT

lol-- nope

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Bryce — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 20:50:11 GMT

YAY for Abigail not being just another damsel in distress !!!!

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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 20:25:05 GMT

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Cecilia Dominic — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 20:23:07 GMT

Glad she took out two of the scumbags! I wonder who she's truly looking for.

CD

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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 14:32:38 GMT

Thanks Eric! I was going for that ... I'm glad it worked!

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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 14:31:50 GMT

Thank you!!

I wrote this as a class exercise, which was to start with a far narrative distance and come in close, but never reveal the main character's thought patterns. So -- I started with a main character that was timid, but she transformed into a bit of a vigilante by the time I was done with it.

I'm working on more ideas for her.

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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 14:28:31 GMT

Thank you! I wanted to bring it just to the point of real discomfort, and then change the position of power.

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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 14:27:34 GMT

Thank you! I'm debating whether or not I expand her character a bit.

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Debs2 — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 14:26:31 GMT

In this case, I'll take that as a good thing

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Shannon Esposito — Sat, 13 Feb 2010 18:46:48 GMT

Seems like she had a score to settle! Very intense. I love this phrase "the firery blast ruptured the air inside the warehouse" Very powerful.